--- a/paper/introduction.tex	Mon Apr 01 18:41:37 2013 +0900
+++ b/paper/introduction.tex	Mon Apr 01 19:15:36 2013 +0900
@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
 
 DEOSプロセスにおいて, 全てのデータを保持するD-ADD(DEOS Agreement Description Database)と呼ばれるデータベースがある.
 D-ADDで扱うデータにはステークホルダ間で合意された契約書等も含まれる.
-そのためD-ADDは基本ツールとして合意形成支援ツールを持っていると考えられている.
+そのためD-ADDに基本ツールとして合意形成支援ツールが必要である.
 
-本研究ではD-ADDで行われる合意形成の1つの案としてモデルを提案しプロトタイプの実装を行う.
+本研究ではD-ADDで行われる合意形成のモデルを提案しツールのプロトタイプの実装を行う.
 また, 実際に例題を入力してみてD-ADDにおける合意形成支援のあり方についての追求を行う.
 
 \begin{figure}[tb]

--- a/paper/sigos.tex	Mon Apr 01 18:41:37 2013 +0900
+++ b/paper/sigos.tex	Mon Apr 01 19:15:36 2013 +0900
@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@
 \end{abstract}
 % 英文概要
 \begin{eabstract}
-D-ADD is important in the DEOS project aimed at building a Dependable System. 
-It is database for maintain request of the target system.
-D-ADD have the consensus building tool to fulfill the accountability required
-when the system fails.
-It is considered that this consensus building tool will be able to see the relationship between the temporal agreement status.
-In this paper, we suggest a method to support consensus building with a tree structure for to fulfill the accountability required.
-In addition, it implement as Web application, to confirm its effectiveness.
+D-ADD is a Knowledge Database in the DEOS project, which aimed at building a Dependable Systems.
+It is the database which maintains requests and responsibilities of the target system.
+D-ADD has a consensus building tool to fulfill the responsbilities when the system fails.
+This consensus building tool shows the temporal relationship of agreement statuses.
+In this paper, we propose a knowledge structure of consensus building tool.
+It is a tree structure of requirements and responses.
+We implement a Web application using GraphDB and show some examples.
 \end{eabstract}
 % 表題などの出力
 \maketitle